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public/css/index.css

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-#mobile-notice {
+#the-long-road-to-freedom
+{
+	display:block;
+	width: 107px;
+	margin-left: auto;
+	margin-right: auto;
+	margin-top: 24px;
+	margin-bottom: 24px;
+}
+
+#declaration-of-independence 
+{
+	border:5px solid #aaa;
+	background-color: #eee;
+	border-radius: 8px;
+	padding: 12px;
+}
+
+#mobile-notice 
+{
 	display: none;
 	text-align: center;
 }
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public/index.html

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 	<div id="message">A message goes here. Is it a message in a bottle? No, it’s a message in a div, silly.</div>
 
-	<h2>Are you indie?</h2>
+	<h2>Why are you indie?</h2>
 
-	<p>Record a short 30-60 second video to tell us why you will support Ind.ie during <a href='https://ind.ie/launch'>our launch on November 8th</a> and why others should do so also.</p>
+	<p>Record a short 30 second video to tell us why you support <a href='https://ind.ie'>Ind.ie</a> and why others should also <a href='https://ind.ie/launch'>at our launch on November 8th</a>.</p>
 
 	<p>Tell us in your own words, in your own language, in your own unique creative way…</p>
 
-	<p>…or interpret the script of the next iteration of the Ind.ie manifesto. We pasted the text of it below. If we get enough variations, we’ll intercut your faces with ours for our crowdfunding video.</p>
+	<p>…or read our <a href='#declaration-of-independence'>Declaration of Independence</a>.</p>
 
-	<p>We’ll use bits of our favourite videos on our crowdfunding video and make the longer versions available here.</p>
+	<p>We’ll use bits of our favourite recordings in our launch video and make the longer versions available here.</p>
 
-	<p>(And, if you haven’t done so already, please also <a href='https://www.thunderclap.it/projects/18064-ind-ie'>lend us your voice via our Thunderclap</a>.</p>
+	<p>(And, if you haven’t already, please also <a href='https://www.thunderclap.it/projects/18064-ind-ie'>lend us your voice via our Thunderclap.</a>)</p>
 
-	<p><em>By recording and submitting a video, you agree that we can release it under a Creative Commons Attribution ShareAlike license.</em></p>
+	<p><em>By recording and submitting a video, you agree that we can release it under a <a href='https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.0/uk/'>Creative Commons Attribution-ShareAlike 2.0 UK: England &amp; Wales license.</a></em></p>
 
-	<p>Thank you!</p>
+	<p><strong>Thank you!</strong></p>
 
 	<p><a href='https://ind.ie/team'>The Ind.ie Team</a><br><em>(Aral, Laura, Jo, Andy, and Victor)</em></p>
 
-	<h2>#iamindie</h2>
+	<img id='the-long-road-to-freedom' src='https://ind.ie/assets/images/long-road-to-freedom.png' alt='The long road to freedom.'>
 
-	<h3 id="hello-im-__"><a name="user-content-hello-im-__" href="#hello-im-__" class="headeranchor-link"  aria-hidden="true"><span class="headeranchor"></span></a>Hello, I’m <strong><em>_</em></strong>_.</h3>
+	<section id='declaration-of-independence'>
 
-	<p>I love the Internet. I love modern technology. I love to share, to learn, to grow, to connect…</p>
+		<h1>Declaration of Independence</h1>
 
-	<p><strong>I don’t love being your product.</strong></p>
+		<h3>I am indie.</h3>
 
-	<p>I am not a <em>thing</em> to be mined and farmed and sold.</p>
+		<p>I love the Internet. I love modern technology. I love to share, to learn, to grow, to connect…</p>
 
-	<p>I am not your lab rat.</p>
+		<p><strong>I don’t love being your product.</strong></p>
 
-	<p><strong>I am a <em>person</em>.</strong></p>
+		<p>I am not a <em>thing</em> to be mined and farmed and sold.</p>
 
-	<p>I have rights and I have freedoms.</p>
+		<p>I am not your lab rat.</p>
 
-	<p>I will protect them.</p>
+		<p><strong>I am a <em>person</em>.</strong></p>
 
-	<p>So, Google, Facebook, Yahoo!, Microsoft, … <strong>I say <em>no</em> to your spyware</strong></p>
+		<p>I have rights and I have freedoms.</p>
 
-	<p><strong>I want technology that protects our freedoms, human rights, and democracy, not technology that erodes them.</strong></p>
+		<p>I will protect them.</p>
 
-	<p>I want technology that I own and control, not technology owned and controlled by corporations.</p>
+		<p>So, Google, Facebook, Yahoo!, Microsoft, … <strong>I say <em>no</em> to your spyware</strong></p>
 
-	<p><strong>I want indepedent technology.</strong></p>
+		<p><strong>I want technology that protects our freedoms, human rights, and democracy, not technology that erodes them.</strong></p>
 
-	<p>I’m an individual.</p>
+		<p>I want technology that I own and control, not technology owned and controlled by corporations.</p>
 
-	<p>I am independent.</p>
+		<p><strong>I want indepedent technology.</strong></p>
 
-	<p><strong>I am indie.</strong></p>
+		<p>I’m an individual.</p>
+
+		<p>I am independent.</p>
+
+		<p><strong>I am indie.</strong></p>
+
+	</section>
 
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